Today’s suggestion comes from my dear old mum! Yes, yes, I know, it’s not very rock and roll to get Mummy Dearest involved one’s projects, but personally I couldn’t give a monkey’s about that! My mum has given me plenty of encouragement with my writing and I am very pleased that she wanted to help me out directly this time. Also, I’m not very rock and roll anyway, so nothing changes!
Anyway, today’s word is “RANCID”. One can only speculate where this suggestion came from…I do hope it’s not a character association! I like the word a lot and decided to use it today. Thanks again, Mum!
Here’s what I was able to come up with. I hope you enjoy it.
RANCID
By Adam Dixon
Tobias squinted up at the midday sun and cursed the torturous sphere with every ounce of vehemence he could muster. Even the stone block he was sitting on was warming up, much to his dismay. He lifted a bony hand to his face and wiped the remnants of a rotten tomato from his left eye, wincing as he felt a tender spot on his cheek.
“That must be from the potatoes the washer-women were throwing,” he muttered to himself. “Damn good shot, that one! Nearly bowled me over!” He looked down at himself and sighed in resignation. He was covered from head to foot with an array of interesting and disgusting detritus, some of which could be readily identified. He could see that tomatoes, onions, potatoes, apples and even turnips had been pulverised against his arms and body, making him slick with stinking, sticky juices. Almost all of them had been rotten, which was something of a blessing because the few unripe projectiles among them had left him battered and bruised. Tobias attempted to make his legs more comfortable, but the wooden stocks clamped around his ankles gave him no such freedom. He supposed that he should be grateful that he hadn’t been placed in the pillory instead; at least he could mostly shield his head this way.
“How I long for the days of greater acceptance!” Tobias cast his dejected expression Heaven-ward once again. “Oh Lord, why must I be humiliated so? I did no harm to anyone with my antics! It was only a dress…” He trailed off into silence miserably. With all the great strides men were making in science, technology and enlightenment theory it baffled Tobias that an old man deciding to wear women’s clothes in his own house could cause such an uproar. There was no need for all this, surely! At least the villagers had retired for the afternoon…
Tobias glanced up as he heard giggling and approaching footsteps. He saw three local boys, none of them more than seven years old, creeping steadily towards him carrying dirty sacks over their shoulders.
“Oh, what fresh terrors await me, now?” Tobias cried aloud, causing the boys to stop suddenly. They were about ten feet away from the stocks and for a moment they looked doubtful over their purpose. However, this hesitation was quickly dispelled when the largest of the three dropped his sack and plunged a hand into it. He pulled out a suspicious brown substance and tossed it right at the helpless Tobias. It was not a particularly good throw as it hit him in the thigh, but no sooner had it made an impact the other two boys were following suit. As they flung double-handfuls of the stuff at Tobias he realised with horror and disgust what it was. It was manure!
“You little wretches! You stop this at once!” he roared, flinging his arms in front of his face. “By the Lord Almighty, if I weren’t trapped in here I’d give you such a thrashing! STOP!”
The boys began laughing uproariously, continuing to pelt the impotent Tobias as he bellowed at them. When they had exhausted their ammunition they stood still, staring in wonder at their accomplishment. Tobias was covered in steaming brown muck, his fury so intense that he was incapable of coherent speech. He waved his arms about madly, shaking off bits of manure as he did so. The boys ran off laughing, slapping each other on the back and congratulating themselves for a job well done. Tobias lowered his arms and looked at himself again. He was appalled by the sight and had never felt so humiliated.
“All for a bloody dress!” He managed to squeak out once his throat had loosened a little bit, his eyes wide and his breathing heavy. After a few minutes he had calmed down enough to feel miserable again, so he slumped forwards, resting his filthy head in his filthier hands.
“Oh, Lord!” he groaned. “It will take me days to wash out the smell!” He looked up at the sky again, his face scorched by the sun. “I don’t suppose there is any chance of a spot of rain soon?” He asked hopefully. As he stared upwards, he heard more footsteps approaching. The three young boys were coming back, and they were puffing and panting as they supported a large bucket between them. A pale yellow liquid slopped to and fro as the bucket swung with their movements. Tobias almost laughed!
“Oh, but what a big mouth I appear to have!” he said as he braced himself. He only hoped this day would end soon!
You had me cracking up wondering where your mom got her inspiration for her word choice. Then had me feeling bad for poor Tobias. I tell you I catch all of the sad ones AJ! 😦
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Oh, Niki! Again! You really do have a knack for this 😕 I hope you liked it, though.
Glad I could make you laugh in the first instance, anyway! 😄 Read the story for Day 16, that ought to cheer you up! 😉 -cough- shameless plug! -cougj-
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Hahaha it was excellent! It did have me wondering how you come up with such versatile content. I just couldn’t believe I’d done it again! No such thing as a shameless plug on your own blog! 🙂 I’ll have to check that post out 🙂
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Thanks 😊 I don’t know, really. The ideas just seem to leap out at me sometimes and then it becomes a matter of pinning them down.
Cool 😄 Let me know what you think!
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That’s amazing! Will do 🙂
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Reblogged this on Kate McClelland and commented:
Awww poor Tobias. There’s no worse police than the ‘fashion’ police :0) Hopefully your Mum didn’t have your socks in mind when she thought of ‘rancid’ hahahaha
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Yuck! I could smell and almost taste all this rubbish and the humiliation. Very well done. You really brought out an emotional response. xx Rowena
PS My dog rolled in dead rat a few days ago and being late at night, my husband retaliated with a can of deodorant xx Rowena
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Glad to hear you engaged with it 😊 I felt sorry for Tobias as I wrote it!
Oh, that sounds like chaos! I wouldn’t have wanted to be in the room that night! 😂
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Chaos reigns here! xx Rowena
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Lol, that was rather funny, and once again, great writing. Your imagination is amazing too, not kidding but it’s not even as if you’re repetitive with your subjects and ideas…I am truly impressed 😀
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Glad you liked it, Nathalie 😊 Aww thanks, blushing over here now 😀
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Don’t be modest man!😜
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It’s still fucking great to hear it, don’t get me wrong haha!
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Well, duh! 😜😂
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